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Notes on the larger or
more significant cuts
Unless otherwise stated,
all chapter references in the body of these notes are to the 1922 text
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Description
of omission |
Words
in the subscribers' abridgement following the omission |
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1922
text Chapter 1 | Subscribers' abridgement omitted, but printed as the Introductory chapter in English editions after
1940 |
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146 words omitted after
para. 2, before the para. beginning 'The dates and places are correct'. Discusses
the inclusion of literary allusions in the text. |
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70 words omitted before
the para. beginning 'We were three years over this effort', about Lawrence's
achievement, including comment on racial issues. |
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1922
text Chapter 2 | Subscribers' abridgement Chapter 1 |
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80-word para.
omitted at the beginning of the chapter, pointing out that Lawrence's account of
the campaign is personal and doubtless therefore imperfect. |
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1922
text Chapter 3-4 | Subscribers' abridgement Chapter 2 |
| 35 |
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151 words omitted
from the end of Chapter 3, on
geography. |
'In the north
(Syria)' |
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1922
text Chapter 5 | Subscribers' abridgement Chapter 3 |
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Scattered small cuts and
amendments reduced the text by 92 words. |
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1922
text Chapter 6 | Subscribers' abridgement Chapter 4 |
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93 words omitted, commenting on the
unwillingness of the Turks to educate their Arab subjects and the willingness of
foreigners (e.g. the American College in Beirut) - and the resentment towards
the Turks that this caused. |
'Then came the Turkish
revolution' |
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1922
text Chapter 7 | Subscribers' abridgement Chapter 5 |
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Scattered small cuts and
amendments reduced the text by 38 words overall, despite the expansion below. |
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The opening of the
para. beginning 'Feisal found Medina' has been expanded from 29 to 55
words. |
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1922
text Chapter 8 | Subscribers' abridgement Chapter 6 |
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Scattered small cuts and
amendments reduced the text by 49 words overall, despite the expansion below. |
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25 words in parentheses added to the para. beginning 'We
called ourselves "Intrusive"', on Cairo. |
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1922
text Chapter 9 | Subscribers' abridgement Chapter 7 |
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Scattered small cuts and
amendments reduced the text by 80 words. |
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Para beginning 'He
found help in his General Staff'. Much of this para. was rewritten at proof stage
by Bernard Shaw, to remove potentially actionable comments about Sir Ronald
Graham. |
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